I will concede to your wishes, we’ll leave the rest to chance.
There’s nothing left to take hold, time to sever the branch.
Poisoned are the seeds, laced within the roots,
spoil without the sun, bare of any fruit.
The leaves will all wither and slowly they will die,
for my last attempt to grow, has become my final goodbye.
Terrific poem
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Thanks my friend, appreciate you reading it.
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Marvelous!
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You think so? Awesome. Thanks for reading, really appreciate it. 😀
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I do think so! It”s beautiful!!!
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Thanks so much.
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Great poem. I loved it.
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Thanks, I’m glad you like it. Appreciate your dropping by to read.
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Directly to the root of the matter… Going thru a separation/probably divorce right now. This poem says exactly what I didn’t know how to say… Kudos!
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Thanks my friend, glad you liked it. Just process!!
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Through poetry, one can guess wounds, doubts and fears; which makes melancholy or dark poems more interesting than others.
Like many people, I love the tortured poet!
Again please …
Vanina Lys
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Why thank you, I appreciate you saying this.
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Goosebumps.
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Thanks for your comment 😀
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Great lines 👌
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Thanks
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Reblogged this on From 1 Blogger 2 Another.
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Thanks so much for this my friend, the ultimate compliment. Really appreciate your support.
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My pleasure Ash! — Douglas
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