
white
white everywhere
no walls
no floor
no ceiling
just white
am I touching anything
am I alive
where is the door through which I come
did I walk through by will
is this punishment for the black
is this void now my penance
I feel no love
I feel no loss
where are my memories
tell me what sin lead me here
I can’t see in this light
because of my darkness
This was so sad to read. The desperation really shined (!) through.
But the closing lines were the best – you realize the potential problem. Now all you have to do is fill yourself with light. Sounds simple enough, right?
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You’re interpretation and comment gave me back something only a few could give. You read everything between my lines. Thanks, friend.
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Such raw writing, it’s beautiful. Yes, even in darkness, it’s still beautiful. I hope you’re well.
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Thank you for your comment. It means a lot. I’m good, processing, but good. Hoping you’re well.
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You’re welcome. I’m glad you’re okay and doing good. I’m always here if you need anything ♥
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Thanks, again. Your comment brings a smile and I’m grateful. Take care.
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This is lovely and strong. May you find the light…I’m seeking it too.
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Thank you. Sending all the light your way!!! Take care.
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