I Can Tell its Home!

black and white hand raining

Grant me that yesterday tomorrow.
I want to run again in November rain.
Taste once more, those raindrops.
Pinch me because I’m alive.

Let me feel it to the bone,
that day…
I wore the fog home.

Seagulls bicker,
over drenched catch laid in blood,
but that day, no matter.
T’was Mother Nature’s chore.
All backdrops to my soul

My lungs, they catch up,
though heartbeats have no pace.
One listen to the ocean,
one breath to the shore.
I can tell its home.

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13 Comments on “I Can Tell its Home!”

short-prose-fiction Jan 12, 2019 at 00:28 am

Ash, this is breathtaking! You are so talented.

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- Ash Douglas Jan 12, 2019 at 02:37 am
  
  Really? Thanks so much.
  
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  - short-prose-fiction Jan 12, 2019 at 02:47 am
    
    Really! Your poetry is so powerful.
    
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  - Ash Douglas Jan 12, 2019 at 11:42 am
    
    You know, I hold your compliments in the highest regard.
    
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  - short-prose-fiction Jan 12, 2019 at 11:43 am
    
    Thank you, Ash 😊
    
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iScriblr Jan 12, 2019 at 02:08 am

Beautiful!

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- Ash Douglas Jan 12, 2019 at 12:45 pm
  
  Thank you.
  
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Anthony quann Jan 12, 2019 at 13:23 pm

Wow,great job buddy

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- Ash Douglas Jan 12, 2019 at 14:45 pm
  
  Thanks pops!!
  
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Susan Quann Jan 15, 2019 at 13:45 pm

Beautiful such soul

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- Ash Douglas Jan 15, 2019 at 13:46 pm
  
  Thanks mother..xoxoxo
  
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thelonelyauthorblog Jan 21, 2019 at 19:54 pm

Awesome. So happy I didn’t miss this my friend

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- Ash Douglas Jan 21, 2019 at 23:04 pm
  
  Thanks my buddy!
  
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