Defeated Ash Douglas blog, Poetry May 18, 2017May 18, 2017 1 Minute Just when the sun peeks the brightest, an eclipse takes aim right for it. A smile protecting what’s left, I take a knee. Share this:TwitterFacebookLinkedInRedditTumblrPinterestEmailLike this:Like Loading... Published by Ash Douglas Writer, Poet, Thinker, Paralegal, Miawpukek First Nations, GymLife, Runner, Bike Writer, & Pun Enthusiast I like my puns intended. ✍️ “I don’t claim to be a great writer, but I’m enjoying the journey of becoming one” View all posts by Ash Douglas Published May 18, 2017May 18, 2017
Deep. 🙂
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Very raw! I wanted to take a knee reading it. Great write!
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Thanks for taking the time to read
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Deep! I had to keep reread it to get the visual. Wonderful imagery!
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Thanks for reading… really appreciate your comment😀
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