Defeated

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Just when the sun peeks the brightest,
an eclipse takes aim right for it.
A smile protecting what’s left,
I take a knee.

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5 Comments on “Defeated”

❦Just Me❦ May 18, 2017 at 21:16 pm

Deep. 🙂

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Lisa Ralph, Cries from an unkempt garden May 19, 2017 at 19:55 pm

Very raw! I wanted to take a knee reading it. Great write!

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- Ash Douglas May 19, 2017 at 20:25 pm
  
  Thanks for taking the time to read
  
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kwesispeaks May 20, 2017 at 13:09 pm

Deep! I had to keep reread it to get the visual. Wonderful imagery!

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- Ash Douglas May 20, 2017 at 17:13 pm
  
  Thanks for reading… really appreciate your comment😀
  
  Reply

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