
Sometimes, I think my heart breaks without telling me
Like it’s trying to feel something it once did before
Though, if I allow myself to give in to its longing
I’ll go and break it even more
It aches me some days, ripping its way from my chest
reacting on account of fear
That it will never get a chance to love like that again
so it tries to remind me every time with a tear
Take those tears and fill the spaces love forgot,
for now…just keep me alive
I did my very best to repair us,
make it better, make that love survive
But, please…my pleading heart, leave me alone,
stop tugging at the strings of a father estranged
For I am done trying to convince you,
that it’s her heart…that will never change
Ash, this is the most beautiful thing you have ever written. You tugged at my heart strings. It really broke my heart.
I was once punished by my own daughter who went a year and a half without speaking to me.
I wish your heart peace and love. After reading this, I would give you mine if I could.
Bravo on the poem. Sorry about life.
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Drew, you don’t understand how happy you just made me feel reading that comment. I had a rough day today, and this poem was the result. I appreciate your arm on the shoulder my buddy, I won’t so forget those words of support. I’m happy to call you my friend.
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The feeling is mutual.
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What a gorgeous young lady. And you look so happy in this photo.
I had to re-read this piece twice because of how amazing it is. Absolutely brilliant.
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And, to receive a comment like that, makes the pain of writing it worth it. Made my day reading this. Much appreciated my friend. Means the world. Take care!!
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This is so incredible it made me tear up 💔
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Awe, thank you. I appreciate you saying that. It was hard coming out, but comments like yours made it all worth it. Take care!!
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This just makes me wish I could give you a hug. Beautiful
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Thanks for saying that, means a lot. I’m glad you liked it. Take care.
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Well said…👍🏻
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Thanks
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Beautiful, raw and honest; your words here are like blue jewels.
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Thanks my friend, I’m happy you came by for a read. I love your comment, that’s an awesome way to put it. Take care!
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Awesome my friend, thanks
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You bet Ash!
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