A Day Dream – Haiku

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looking ashore I
do spot what a day feels like
do feel in a spot like

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Published by Ash Douglas

Writer, Published Poet, WritersNL Member, Paralegal, Miawpukek First Nations, GymLife, Runner, Bike Writer, & Pun Enthusiast. I like my puns intended. ✍️ “I don’t claim to be a great writer, but I’m enjoying the journey of becoming one”

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5 thoughts on “A Day Dream – Haiku”

  1. Ok…. I didn’t see this one until I got up at 4am…and I read it a few times and couldn’t wrap my sleepy head around it… Tried reading after I woke up a bit… Thought about it driving to work, and I’m sorry it’s not computing for me… I get the idea – I think – but could you help me out with that last line? That’s where my pumpkin head is struggling and I think I need some author’s notes…lol…🫣 …

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      1. okay, so I DID understand it… !! I mean, I did interpret it as looking back at a day and remembering how it felt and being there again…but there was something about the structure of that last line that threw me off and had me all 😵‍💫… Lol…. Please forgive my “blonde moment” ….😂…

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