Those Shades Looked Better on You
Your smile that day was the last,
when those shades looked better on you.
This the chance?
Sun high, mid-afternoon,
like yesterday,
memorial to me.
Funny, we talked longer, unlike us,
the hint?
A stride from you taken, farewell implied,
it felt no different,
only to you, it was.
My goodbye changed forever,
when those shades looked better on you.
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Ash Douglas
I really love your poems; reading them is an amazing experience. They display very deep thoughts.
Good luck and keep writing 🙂
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Great comment to wake up to…that means a lot. I appreciate your being one of my readers. Thank you
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Love this poem keep up the great work
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Loved this.
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Thank you, appreciate the comment
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I love this 💕
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Thank you
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A little heart wrenching, mixed in with a touch of wistful. ❤︎
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