It’s still no matter that desire exists, I keep lying to myself.
Surely something must distract your sound sleep as it does for me.
That unlocked door has remained ajar for so long now,
a little light still glimmers against the ingress of doubt.
I remain indignant, stuck in this emotional vacuum devoid of what matters, screaming, bawling, through the hubbub, alone in quietude with not even a whisper to keep me content.
Lovely. ☺️
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Thanks
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beautifully angsty…….hope you’ve been well. 🤗
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Interesting and intriguing. The lack of sleep and the anguish of raining thoughts with an awareness of surrounding simply loved it.
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Thanks for reading, I like your interpretation. Considered your blog followed 🙂
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Thank you that is extremely kind.Looking forward to more posts and advice.
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I really like this poem. It feels so raw and yet the words still try to hide it.
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Thanks man, appreciate your time reading it. And that’s funny because just last night I was going to reach out and say that I was in on your submission blog and you beat me to it lol… I’m definitely on board with that. Btw thanks for the offer as well 😀
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Ha! I’m glad you were about to. I was like, how do I say this without sounding crazy, but I’d love his work on the blog? 🙂 I look forward to your submission!!
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Trust me, I take it as a compliment.
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I love the rawness..and the word hubbub 🙂
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Thanks …i know right? Hubbub!
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Such a fun word!
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Oh, you are really fair play Ash you have all my gratitude!
It is true that t is a generosity in your writing.
Thank you
Vanina Lys
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Thank you too
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