Writer, Published Poet, WritersNL Member, Paralegal, Miawpukek First Nations, GymLife, Runner, Bike Writer, & Pun Enthusiast. I like my puns intended. ✍️
“I don’t claim to be a great writer, but I’m enjoying the journey of becoming one”
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“music blaring through the smoke”… That line’s on 🔥… You captured this situation – the atmosphere of the venue and of the temptation – perfectly… Again, even without visual cues, it’s obvious where we are, what we’re experiencing…another high five ✋🏼 to you for another hot piece… I’ve been not-so-patiently waiting for the next one to drop – it was worth the wait! 😁
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“music blaring through the smoke”… That line’s on 🔥… You captured this situation – the atmosphere of the venue and of the temptation – perfectly… Again, even without visual cues, it’s obvious where we are, what we’re experiencing…another high five ✋🏼 to you for another hot piece… I’ve been not-so-patiently waiting for the next one to drop – it was worth the wait! 😁
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Thank you!!! I appreciate your comment.
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