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Utterly delightful!! The play on words with “frost bites,” the sweet, thought of the first rays of day being a “sun kiss”… You capture that pre-dawn experience, perfectly projecting the bite of the twilight chill in contrast to the warmth of morning’s first light … Can be seen as a metaphor for life as well (or maybe just mine…. 😂)….
Utterly delightful!! The play on words with “frost bites,” the sweet, thought of the first rays of day being a “sun kiss”… You capture that pre-dawn experience, perfectly projecting the bite of the twilight chill in contrast to the warmth of morning’s first light … Can be seen as a metaphor for life as well (or maybe just mine…. 😂)….
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Nailed it!
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