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Earth To Ash 
“I need time/space” is a slippery slope because out of sight out of mind…
I could tell this was going to be a difficult one from the very first word you had spoken – such a different tone of your voice.
The way you’ve recounted the encounter at the coffee place made me feel as if I was in your shoes. Heart-wrenching.
Those that know the situation – do they understand why she is behaving that way?
A beautiful poem.
It reminded me of something I struggle with… my father hurt me deeply many times for a few years. I never cut him off but did somewhat distance myself. I expected him to try and fix things but instead – he pushed me further and further away and then wondered why I wasn’t as close as he would have wanted. Hearing about all the things you did to get back into, as you put it – her heart made me even sadder because I wish my father tried even a fraction of that… It will be the anniversary of his passing in a couple of days, so this is very timely for me…
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You’re 110% right. A very slippery slope. This one was hard, but it made me feel so good to communicate it this way. I felt like I was releasing a lot of weight off my shoulders to friends. In the end, it was great and I appreciate that you took the time to be an ear for me. You’re one of those people I spoke of. Thanks on the poem. It basically describes how one chance could change it all. On your dad. Oh wow. My condolences🙏. Sad how things play out sometimes. Well, I’m glad you’re in my life and that’s for sure. Take care, friend and stay Golden.
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Wow, I love this. It means the world to me that you decided to share this with me. It takes a lot of strength to open one’s self up. It’s the main reason I blog, I write poetry, write quotes, and Podcast because I want to be the vessel for others. So they may too find it within themselves to exorcise or explore their demons. Or merely channel those emotions and let them out. When you’re ready, I would love to hear the rest of your thought. For now, take time and heal some more. I appreciate your comment and the time to read and listen to what I have chosen to release to the world. Life is a journey and it’s never easy, but that’s why the universe connects us in cases like this. Be strong, and never hold back. Thank you because this has now sparked my need to get back in front of the mic. I have been struggling as of late as I have lost myself somewhat. It’s the randomness of comments like this that remind me that I meant to be there for whoever has chosen to listen. Until…
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I am smiling from ear to ear. I had to wait for a home to respond after seeing the notification on my commute. This made my day and that poem, wow…just wow. I am so moved and was blushing the whole time reading. You’re an exceptional writer and a genuinely kind soul. As I said, it’s the universe that connects the dots of emotional connection. As poets and writers, we get a front seat to the inside of ourselves and others. What you have written is a testament to that. I am happy we connected and we can absolutely be friends and share support and motivation on our journeys as writers. I’ve been going through a very rough time lately and this has been the pick-me-up I needed. No one has ever written a poem about me and I am still reeling from the emotion. I wish you the best and do not be a stranger and keep being you. Have a wonderful rest of your day and happy writing. Until… 🙂
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Well, that’s great news as well. Congrats and looking forward to reading it. Have a wonderful day!
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